What do you think of my poem? (please answer)?

Oh my gosh, I love it! It isn't poorly written at all. The last line is definitely the best. I have never cut myself but I've seen my friends go through it so I kind of know what its like. I know this is kind of a small detail, but I think the forth to last line would sound better without the 'through', but thats just a suggestion. You should write more, you have talent! =]